你应该修改对他的看法。
We must revise it to achieve variety and proper emphasis on the main idea, and we must say them with logic and accuracy.我们必须修改初稿使其多样化和突出中心内容,并且要使它们准确和符合逻辑。
You may sell a book or radio show idea, go on a speaking tour, or be given an important project to revise and edit.你可以出售书籍或广播节目的想法,去巡回演讲,或给予重要的项目进行修改和编辑。